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  1. %**************************************************************************
  2. %*
  3. %* Paper: ``INSTRUCTIONS FOR AUTHORS OF LATEX DOCUMENTS''
  4. %*
  5. %* Publication: 2018 Winter Simulation Conference Author Kit
  6. %*
  7. %* Filename: writgd18.tex
  8. %*
  9. %* Date: January 25, 2018 Time: 9:45 PM
  10. %* BASE of current version: Feb 01, 2010 (primary WSC'10 LaTeX file)
  11. %*
  12. %* Word Processing System: TeXnicCenter and MiKTeX
  13. %*
  14. %*
  15. %* All files need the following
  16. \input{wsc18style.tex} % download from author kit. Style files for wsc formatting. Don't remove this line - required for generating the final paper!
  17. \documentclass{wscpaperproc}
  18. \usepackage{latexsym}
  19. %\usepackage{caption}
  20. \usepackage{graphicx}
  21. \usepackage{mathptmx}
  22. %
  23. %****************************************************************************
  24. % AUTHOR: You may want to use some of these packages. (Optional)
  25. \usepackage{amsmath}
  26. \usepackage{amsfonts}
  27. \usepackage{amssymb}
  28. \usepackage{amsbsy}
  29. \usepackage{amsthm}
  30. %****************************************************************************
  31. %
  32. %****************************************************************************
  33. % AUTHOR: If you do not wish to use hyperlinks, then just comment
  34. % out the hyperref usepackage commands below.
  35. %% This version of the command is used if you use pdflatex. In this case you
  36. %% cannot use ps or eps files for graphics, but pdf, jpeg, png etc are fine.
  37. \usepackage[pdftex,colorlinks=true,urlcolor=blue,citecolor=black,anchorcolor=black,linkcolor=black]{hyperref}
  38. %% The next versions of the hyperref command are used if you adopt the
  39. %% outdated latex-dvips-ps2pdf route in generating your pdf file. In
  40. %% this case you can use ps or eps files for graphics, but not pdf, jpeg, png etc.
  41. %% However, the final pdf file should embed all fonts required which means that you have to use file
  42. %% formats which can embed fonts. Please note that the final PDF file will not be generated on your computer!
  43. %% If you are using WinEdt or PCTeX, then use the following. If you are using
  44. %% Y&Y TeX then replace "dvips" with "dvipsone"
  45. %%\usepackage[dvips,colorlinks=true,urlcolor=blue,citecolor=black,%
  46. %% anchorcolor=black,linkcolor=black]{hyperref}
  47. %****************************************************************************
  48. %
  49. %****************************************************************************
  50. %*
  51. %* AUTHOR: YOUR CALL! Document-specific macros can come here.
  52. %*
  53. %****************************************************************************
  54. %****************************************************************************
  55. %*
  56. %* Miscellaneous new command definitions I sometimes like to use...
  57. %
  58. \newcommand{\emdash}{\text{---}}
  59. \newcommand{\ben}{\begin{enumerate}
  60. \setlength{\parskip}{\smallskipamount}
  61. \setlength{\parsep}{\smallskipamount}
  62. \setlength{\itemsep}{\smallskipamount}
  63. }
  64. \newcommand{\een}{\end{enumerate}}
  65. %\newcommand{\sect}[1]{\section*{{\large\bf#1}}} % Better ver. of \section*{}
  66. %\renewcommand{\arraystretch}{1.5}
  67. \newcommand{\comment}[1]{}
  68. \newcount\hour \newcount\minutes \hour=\time \divide\hour by 60
  69. \minutes=\hour \multiply\minutes by -60 \advance\minutes by \time
  70. \def\Hour{\number\hour}
  71. \def\Minutes{\ifnum\minutes<10 0\fi\number\minutes}
  72. \def\HourMinutes{\Hour:\Minutes}
  73. %*
  74. %* End of miscellaneous new command definitions
  75. %*
  76. %*****************************************************************************
  77. % If you use theoremes
  78. \newtheoremstyle{wsc}% hnamei
  79. {3pt}% hSpace abovei
  80. {3pt}% hSpace belowi
  81. {}% hBody fonti
  82. {}% hIndent amounti1
  83. {\bf}% hTheorem head fontbf
  84. {}% hPunctuation after theorem headi
  85. {.5em}% hSpace after theorem headi2
  86. {}% hTheorem head spec (can be left empty, meaning `normal')i
  87. \theoremstyle{wsc}
  88. \newtheorem{theorem}{Theorem}
  89. \renewcommand{\thetheorem}{ \arabic{theorem}}
  90. \newtheorem{corollary}[theorem]{Corollary}
  91. \renewcommand{\thecorollary}{\arabic{corollary}}
  92. \newtheorem{definition}{Definition}
  93. \renewcommand{\thedefinition}{\arabic{definition}}
  94. %#########################################################
  95. %*
  96. %* The Document.
  97. %*
  98. \begin{document}
  99. %***************************************************************************
  100. % AUTHOR: AUTHOR NAMES GO HERE
  101. % FORMAT AUTHORS NAMES Like: Author1, Author2 and Author3 (last names)
  102. %
  103. % You need to change the author listing below!
  104. % Please list ALL authors using last name only, separate by a comma except
  105. % for the last author, separate with "and"
  106. %
  107. \WSCpagesetup{Wilson}
  108. % AUTHOR: Enter the title, all letters in upper case
  109. \title{GUIDELINES ON WRITING A GOOD PAPER FOR THE \\
  110. \textbf{\textit{PROCEEDINGS OF THE WINTER SIMULATION CONFERENCE}}}
  111. % AUTHOR: Enter the authors of the article, see end of the example document for further examples
  112. \author{James R. Wilson \\ [12pt]
  113. North Carolina State University \\
  114. Edward P. Fitts Department of Industrial and Systems Engineering \\
  115. Raleigh, NC 27695-7906, USA \\
  116. % Multiple authors are entered as follows.
  117. % You may also need to adjust the titlevbox size in the preamble - search for titlevboxsize
  118. }
  119. \maketitle
  120. % \input{wscpage2.tex}
  121. \section*{ABSTRACT}
  122. As an aid to authors who seek to improve the clarity and readability of
  123. their papers in the \textit{Proceedings of the Winter Simulation
  124. Conference}, this paper summarizes some useful guidelines on technical
  125. writing, including current references on each topic that is discussed.
  126. \section{OUTLINE OF KEY CONSIDERATIONS}
  127. \label{sec:intro}
  128. Writing a clear, readable exposition of complex technical work is at least
  129. as difficult as doing the work in the first place. Given below is an
  130. outline of key considerations to bear in mind during all stages of writing
  131. a paper that will be reviewed for possible presentation at the Winter
  132. Simulation Conference (WSC) as well as publication in the {\em Proceedings
  133. of the Winter Simulation Conference}. For questions about these
  134. guidelines, please send e-mail to
  135. \href{mailto:jwilson@ncsu.edu}{jwilson@ncsu.edu} or contact the proceedings
  136. editors.
  137. %\parindent=0em
  138. \ben %I
  139. \item[I.] Organizing the paper (what to do before beginning to write)
  140. \ben %A
  141. \item[A.] Analyze the situation---that is, the problem, the solution,
  142. and the target audience.
  143. \ben %1
  144. \item[1.] Formulate the objectives of the paper.
  145. \item[2.] Specify the scope of the paper's coverage of the subject and the
  146. results to be discussed. Orient the paper toward the theme of your session
  147. as indicated either by the title of your session or by the instructions of
  148. your session chair. Also take into account the general focus of the track
  149. containing your paper, which could be tutorials, case studies, vendors,
  150. methodologies, domain-specific applications, or general applications.
  151. \item[3.] Identify the target audience and determine the background knowledge
  152. that you can assume for this particular group of people. Introductory
  153. tutorials are generally attended by newcomers who are interested in the
  154. basics of simulation. Advanced tutorials are designed to provide more
  155. experienced professionals with a thorough discussion of special topics of
  156. much current interest; and some special-focus sessions in this track are
  157. designed to provide experts with an overview of recent fundamental advances
  158. in simulation theory. Methodology sessions are attended by professionals
  159. who have at least an undergraduate-level background in computer simulation
  160. techniques. In the case studies and applications tracks, session attendees
  161. are generally familiar with the area covered by their session. Vendor
  162. sessions may contain both new and experienced users of the relevant
  163. software products.
  164. \newpage
  165. \item[4.]
  166. Formulate the most logical sequence for presenting the information
  167. specified in item 2 to the readers identified in item 3. For a discussion
  168. of effective aids in organizing your paper (specifically, brainstorming,
  169. clustering, issue trees, and outlining), see chapter 3 of
  170. Matthews and Matthews (2014). In structuring your presentation, keep the
  171. following points in mind.
  172. %\newpage
  173. %\topmargin=-30.52pt
  174. %\setlength{\topmargin}{-30.52pt}
  175. \ben %a
  176. \item[a.]
  177. Introductory and advanced tutorials should have an educational perspective.
  178. Within the advanced tutorials track, special-focus sessions should synthesize
  179. the latest research results in a unified treatment of a given topic.
  180. \item[b.]
  181. Methodology contributions should provide state-of-the-art information on
  182. proven techniques for designing, building, and analyzing simulation models.
  183. \item[c.]
  184. Application papers should relate directly to the practice of simulation, and
  185. they should emphasize lessons of transferable value.
  186. \een %a
  187. \een %1
  188. \item[B.]
  189. Make outlines to organize your thoughts and then to plan both the
  190. written and oral presentations of your work. For excellent discussions of
  191. the construction and use of various types of outlines, see the following:
  192. chapter 1 of Menzel, Jones, and Boyd (1961); the sections titled ``Develop
  193. an issue tree to assess presentation balance'' and ``Outline to develop the
  194. paper's framework'' in chapter 3 of Matthews and Matthews (2014); and
  195. chapter 3 of Pearsall and Cook (2010).
  196. \ben %1
  197. \item[1.] The introductory paragraph(s)
  198. \ben %a
  199. \item[a.] State the precise subject of the paper immediately.
  200. \item[b.] State the problem to be solved.
  201. \item[c.] Summarize briefly the main results and conclusions.
  202. \item[d.] Tell the reader how the paper is organized.
  203. \een %a
  204. \item[2.] The main body of the paper
  205. \ben %a
  206. \item[a.] Include enough detail in the main body of the paper so that the
  207. reader can understand what you did and how you did it; however, you should
  208. avoid lengthy discussions of technical details that are not of general
  209. interest to your audience.
  210. \item[b.] Include a brief section covering notation, background information,
  211. and key assumptions if it is awkward to incorporate these items into the
  212. introductory paragraph(s).
  213. \item[c.] Include sections on theoretical and experimental methods as
  214. required. For an application paper, you should discuss the development of
  215. the simulation model---including input data acquisition as well as design,
  216. verification, validation, and actual use of the final simulation model.
  217. For a methodological or theoretical paper that requires substantial
  218. mathematical development, see Halmos (1970), Higham (1998), pages 1--8 of
  219. Knuth, Larrabee, and Roberts (1989), Krantz (1997, 2001), or Swanson
  220. (1999). For standard mathematical notation used in engineering and the
  221. sciences, see \textit{ISO 80000-2: Quantities and Units---Part 2:
  222. Mathematical Signs and Symbols to Be Used in the Natural Sciences and
  223. Technology} (ISO 2009) and Scheinerman (2011).
  224. \item[d.] Plan the results section to achieve the most effective mix
  225. of text, figures, and tables in the presentation of the findings. The
  226. definitive reference on the design of tables and figures is Tufte (2001).
  227. \een %a
  228. \item[3.] The concluding paragraph(s)
  229. \ben %a
  230. \item[a.]
  231. Explain how the theoretical and experimental results relate to the original
  232. problem. State why these results are important.
  233. \item[b.]
  234. Summarize any unresolved issues that should be the subject of future work.
  235. \item[c.]
  236. State the final conclusions explicitly in plain language.
  237. \een %a
  238. \een %1
  239. \een %A
  240. %\newpage
  241. \item[II.] Writing the paper
  242. \ben %A
  243. \item[A.]
  244. Prepare an abstract that is concise, complete in itself, and
  245. intelligible to a general reader in the field of simulation. The
  246. abstract may not exceed 150 words, and it should not contain any
  247. references or mathematical symbols.
  248. \ben %1
  249. \item[1.] Summarize the objectives of the paper.
  250. \item[2.] Summarize the results and conclusions.
  251. \item[3.] State the basic principles underlying any new theoretical or
  252. experimental methods that are developed in the paper.
  253. \item[4.]
  254. For complete instructions on the preparation of scientific abstracts, see
  255. {\it Guidelines for Abstracts\/} (NISO 2010), pages 91--93 of Carter
  256. (1987), page 5 of the {\it AIP Style Manual\/} (AIP 1990), or chapter 9 of
  257. Gastel and Day (2016).
  258. \een %1
  259. \item[B.] Write the rest of the paper as though you were talking to a group of
  260. interested colleagues about your work.
  261. \ben %1
  262. \item[1.]
  263. Strive for accuracy and clarity above all else.
  264. \item[2.]
  265. In writing the introduction, you should remember the following maxim:
  266. \begin{quote}
  267. The opening paragraph should be your best paragraph, and its opening
  268. sentence should be your best sentence. (Knuth, Larrabee, and Roberts 1989,
  269. 5)
  270. \end{quote}
  271. You cannot achieve such an ambitious goal on the first try; instead as you
  272. add new sections to the paper, you should review and revise all sections
  273. written so far. For more on the spiral plan of writing, see pages 131--133
  274. of Halmos (1970).
  275. \ben
  276. \item[a.]
  277. Like the abstract, the introduction should be accessible to general
  278. readers in the field of simulation.
  279. \item[b.]
  280. For methodology papers and advanced tutorials,
  281. substantially more advanced background may be assumed in the sections
  282. following the introduction.
  283. \een
  284. \item[3.]
  285. In constructing each sentence, place old and new information in the
  286. respective positions where readers generally expect to find such
  287. information. For an excellent discussion of the principles of scientific
  288. writing based on reader expectations, see Gopen and Swan (1990) and
  289. Williams and Bizup (2014, 2017).
  290. \ben %1
  291. \item[a.] Place in the topic position (that is, at the beginning of the
  292. sentence) the old information linking backward to the previous discussion.
  293. \item[b.] Place in the stress position (that is, at the end of the sentence)
  294. the new information you want to emphasize.
  295. \item[c.] Place the subject of the sentence in the topic position, and follow
  296. the subject with the verb as soon as possible.
  297. \item[d.] Express the action of each sentence in its verb.
  298. \een %1
  299. \item[4.]
  300. Make the paragraph the unit of composition.
  301. \ben %a
  302. \item[a.] Begin each paragraph with a sentence that summarizes the topic to be
  303. discussed or with a sentence that helps the transition from the previous
  304. paragraph.
  305. \item[b.] Provide a context for the discussion before asking the reader to
  306. consider new information.
  307. \item[c.]
  308. Avoid paragraphs of extreme length---that is, one-sentence paragraphs and
  309. those exceeding 200 words.
  310. \item[d.] Place the important conclusions in the stress position at the end of
  311. the paragraph.
  312. \een %a
  313. \item[5.]
  314. Allocate space to a topic in proportion to its relative importance.
  315. \item[6.]
  316. For methodology papers, emphasize the concepts of general applicability
  317. that underlie the solution procedure rather than the technical details that
  318. are specific to the problem at hand. Supply only the technical details and
  319. data that are essential to the development.
  320. \item[7.]
  321. For application papers, emphasize the new insights into the problem
  322. that you gained from designing, building, and using the simulation model.
  323. \item[8.]
  324. Use standard technical terms correctly.
  325. \ben %a
  326. \item[a.]
  327. For standard usage of mathematical terms, see James and James (1992) and
  328. Borowski and Borwein (2002). For example, a nonsquare matrix cannot be
  329. called ``orthogonal'' even if any two distinct columns of that matrix are
  330. orthogonal vectors.
  331. \item[b.]
  332. For standard usage of statistical terms, see Dodge (2003), Porkess (2005),
  333. and Upton and Cook (2014). For example, the probability density function
  334. of a continuous random variable cannot be called a ``probability mass
  335. function.''
  336. \item[c.]
  337. For standard usage of computer terms, see \textit{The Free On-Line
  338. Dictionary of Computing} (Howe 1993) and \textit{Dictionary of Algorithms
  339. and Data Structures} (Black 1998).
  340. \item[d.]
  341. For standard usage of industrial engineering terms, see {\it Industrial
  342. Engineering Terminology\/} (IISE 2000). For example, the time that a workpiece
  343. spends in a manufacturing cell may be called ``cycle time'' or ``flow
  344. time'' but not ``throughput time.''
  345. \een %a
  346. \item[9.]
  347. Avoid illogical or potentially offensive sexist language.
  348. See Miller and Swift (2001) for a commonsense approach to this issue.
  349. \item[10.]
  350. Strictly avoid the following---
  351. \ben %a
  352. \item[a.]
  353. religious, ethnic, or political references;
  354. \item[b.]
  355. personal attacks;
  356. \item[c.]
  357. excessive claims about the value or general applicability of your work; and
  358. \item[d.]
  359. pointed criticism of the work of other people.
  360. \een %a
  361. Such language has no place in scientific discourse under any circumstances,
  362. and it will not be tolerated by the proceedings editors. With
  363. respect to vendor sessions, items c and d immediately above require authors
  364. to avoid invidious comparisons of their products with competing products.
  365. \item[11.]
  366. In writing the final section of the paper containing conclusions and
  367. recommendations for future work, you should keep in mind the following
  368. maxim:
  369. \begin{quote}
  370. The mark of a good summary is revelation: ``Remember this, reader? And
  371. that? Well, here's how they fit together.'' (van Leunen 1992, 116)
  372. \end{quote}
  373. \een %1
  374. \item[C.] For each table, compose a caption that briefly summarizes the
  375. content of the table. Comment explicitly in the text on the significance
  376. of the numbers in the table; do not force the reader to guess at your
  377. conclusions. See sections 3.46--3.85 of {\em The Chicago Manual of Style\/}
  378. (University of Chicago Press 2010) or chapter 16 of Gastel and Day (2016)
  379. for a comprehensive discussion of how to handle tables.
  380. \item[D.]For each figure, compose a caption (or legend) that explains every
  381. detail in the figure---every curve, point, and symbol. See the {\em AIP
  382. Style Manual\/} (AIP 1990) or chapters 17 and 18
  383. of Gastel and Day (2016) for excellent examples.
  384. \item[E.] Revise and rewrite until the truth and clarity of every sentence are
  385. unquestionable.
  386. \ben %1
  387. \item[1.]
  388. For questions about the rules of English grammar and usage, see Bernstein
  389. (1965), Butterfield (2015), Fowler and Aaron (2016), Garner (2016), Hale
  390. (2013), O'Conner (2009), Strunk and White (2000), the \textit{Oxford
  391. English Dictionary} (Simpson and Weiner 1989), and {\it Webster's Third New
  392. International Dictionary of the English Language, Un\-a\-bridged\/} (Gove 1993).
  393. \item[2.]
  394. For those who use English as a second language, particularly helpful
  395. references are Booth (1993), Fowler and Aaron (2016), Huckin and Olsen
  396. (1991), and Yang (1995).
  397. \item[3.]
  398. For guidelines on how to edit your own writing effectively, see Cook (1985).
  399. \item[4.]
  400. For a comprehensive discussion of all aspects of scientific writing, see
  401. Alley (1996) and Gastel and Day (2016).
  402. \een %1
  403. \item[F.]
  404. Prepare a complete and accurate set of references that gives adequate credit
  405. to the prior work upon which your paper is based.
  406. \ben %1
  407. \item[1.]
  408. The author-date system of documentation is required for all papers
  409. appearing in the {\it Proceedings of the Winter Simulation Conference}.
  410. Chapter 15 of {\it The Chicago Manual of Style\/} (University of Chicago Press 2010) provides
  411. comprehensive, up-to-date information on this citation system.
  412. \item[2.]
  413. In preparing your list of references, you should strive for completeness,
  414. accuracy, and consistency. Using the information provided in your list of
  415. references, the interested reader should be able to locate each source of
  416. information cited in your paper.
  417. \item[3.]
  418. For complete instructions on citing electronic sources, see sections
  419. 14.4--14.13 of \textit{The Chicago Manual of Style} (University of Chicago Press 2010). For example, sections 14.5 and 14.6 contain basic
  420. information on uniform resource locators (URLs) and Digital Object
  421. Identifiers (DOIs), respectively; and section 14.12 provides useful rules
  422. for breaking a URL or a DOI across two or more lines either in the text or
  423. in the list of references. Many specific examples of citations for various
  424. types of electronic sources can be found throughout chapters 14 and 15 of
  425. \textit{The Chicago Manual of Style} (University of Chicago Press 2010).
  426. \item[4.] The final electronic version of your paper---that is, the portable
  427. document format (PDF) file ultimately produced from the Word or \LaTeX\
  428. source file of your paper---may include external hyperlinks referring to
  429. some of the electronic sources cited in the paper that are accessible
  430. online.
  431. \ben
  432. \item[a.]
  433. If an external hyperlink is live, then it is colored blue; and when viewing
  434. the PDF file of your paper on a computer, the reader may select (click)
  435. that hyperlink for immediate online access to the cited material. More
  436. specifically, selecting (clicking) a live external hyperlink will activate
  437. the reader's web browser so that, if all goes well, the cited source of
  438. information will be displayed in the web browser. A live external hyperlink
  439. may also be used to activate the reader's e-mail software for sending a
  440. message to a specific e-mail address; for example, see the hyperlink given
  441. in the first paragraph of this document.
  442. \item[b.]
  443. If an external hyperlink is not live, then it is colored black; and such a
  444. hyperlink merely displays the URL or DOI of the cited material without
  445. providing a mechanism for immediate online access to that material.
  446. \item[c.]
  447. If you use external hyperlinks in your paper, then you must ensure that the
  448. text displayed for each external hyperlink is correct and complete so that
  449. a reader who has only a hard copy of the paper can still access the cited
  450. material by (carefully) typing the relevant displayed text of the hyperlink
  451. into the address bar of a web browser or e-mail program. Remember that
  452. your responsibility for the accuracy and completeness of each hyperlink in
  453. your paper parallels your responsibility for the accuracy and completeness
  454. of each conventional citation of a nonelectronic source---neither the
  455. editors nor the publisher of the proceedings can verify any of this
  456. information for you.
  457. \een
  458. \een%1
  459. \item[G.]
  460. See Wilson (2002) for a discussion of the following ethical and
  461. ``strategic'' considerations in writing a scientific paper that will be
  462. considered for publication in a peer-reviewed journal or conference
  463. proceedings such as the \textit{Proceedings of the Winter Simulation
  464. Conference}:
  465. \ben%1
  466. \item[1.]
  467. achieving a consensus among collaborators on who should be a coauthor of
  468. the paper;
  469. \item[2.]
  470. achieving a consensus among coauthors on the order of authorship in the paper's
  471. byline; and
  472. \item[3.]
  473. writing the paper so as to anticipate and answer key questions that will
  474. be asked by the paper's referees and readers.
  475. \een%1
  476. \een %A
  477. \item[III.] Achieving a natural and effective style
  478. \ben %A
  479. \item[A.] Alfred North Whitehead memorably expressed the gist of
  480. the matter of writing style:
  481. \begin{quote}
  482. Finally, there should grow the most austere of all mental qualities; I
  483. mean the sense for style. It is an aesthetic sense, based on admiration
  484. for the direct attainment of a foreseen end, simply and without waste.
  485. Style in art, style in literature, style in science, style in logic,
  486. style in practical execution have fundamentally the same aesthetic
  487. qualities, namely attainment and restraint. The love of a subject in
  488. itself and for itself, where it is not the sleepy pleasure of pacing a
  489. mental quarter-deck, is the love of style as manifested in that study.
  490. \smallskip\parindent=1.2em
  491. Here we are brought back to the position from which we started, the
  492. utility of education. Style, in its finest sense, is the last acquirement
  493. of the educated mind; it is also the most useful. It pervades the whole
  494. being. The administrator with a sense for style hates waste; the engineer
  495. with a sense for style economises his material; the artisan with a sense
  496. for style prefers good work. Style is the ultimate morality of mind.
  497. (Whitehead 1929, 12)
  498. \end{quote}
  499. Kurt Vonnegut made the following equally trenchant observation on
  500. writing style.
  501. \begin{quote}
  502. Find a subject you care about and which you in your heart feel others
  503. should care about. It is this genuine caring, and not your games with
  504. language, which will be the most compelling and seductive element in your
  505. style. (Vonnegut 1985, 34)
  506. \end{quote}
  507. Strunk and White (2000), Williams and Bizup (2014, 2017), and Zinsser
  508. (2006) are excellent references on achieving a natural and effective
  509. writing style.
  510. \item[B.] Contrast the following descriptions of an experiment in optics:
  511. \ben %1
  512. \item[1.] I procured a triangular glass prism, to try therewith the celebrated
  513. phenomena of colors. And for that purpose, having darkened my laboratory, and
  514. made a small hole in my window shade, to let in a convenient quantity of the
  515. sun's light, I placed my prism at the entrance, that the light might be
  516. thereby refracted to the opposite wall. It was at first a very pleasing
  517. diversion to view the vivid and intense colors produced thereby.
  518. \item[2.]
  519. For the purpose of investigating the celebrated phenomena of
  520. chromatic refrangibility, a triangular glass prism was procured.
  521. After darkening the laboratory and making a small aperture in an
  522. otherwise opaque window covering in order to ensure that the optimum
  523. quantity of visible electromagnetic radiation (VER) would be admitted
  524. from solar sources, the prism was placed in front of the aperture for
  525. the purpose of reflecting the VER to the wall on the opposite side of
  526. the room. It was found initially that due to the vivid and intense
  527. colors which were produced by this experimental apparatus, the overall
  528. effect was aesthetically satisfactory when viewed by the eye.
  529. \een %1
  530. The most striking difference between these two accounts of the experiment
  531. is the impersonal tone of the second version. According to version 2,
  532. literally nobody performed the experiment. Attempting to avoid the first
  533. person, the author of version 2 adopted the third person; this in turn
  534. forced the author to use passive verbs. As Menzel, Jones, and Boyd (1961,
  535. 79) point out, ``Passive verbs increase the probability of mistakes in
  536. grammar; they start long trains of prepositional phrases; they foster
  537. circumlocution; and they encourage vagueness.'' Notice the dangling
  538. constructions in the second sentence of version 2. Version 1 was written
  539. by Isaac Newton (1672, 3076). Even though it was written over 340 years
  540. ago, Newton's prose is remarkable for its clarity and readability.
  541. \item[C.] To achieve a natural and effective writing style, you should adhere
  542. to the following principles that are elaborated in chapter 5 of Menzel, Jones,
  543. and Boyd (1961):
  544. \ben %1
  545. \item[1.] Write simply.
  546. \item[2.] Use the active voice.
  547. \item[3.]
  548. Use plain English words rather than nonstandard technical jargon or foreign
  549. phrases.
  550. \item[4.]
  551. Use standard technical terms correctly.
  552. \item[5.]
  553. Avoid long sentences and extremely long (or short) paragraphs.
  554. \item[6.]
  555. Avoid slavish adherence to any set of rules for technical writing, including
  556. the rules enumerated here.
  557. \item[7.]
  558. Remember that the main objective is to communicate your ideas clearly to your
  559. audience.
  560. \een %1
  561. \een %A
  562. \een %I
  563. \section{SUMMARY}
  564. In writing a paper for publication in the \textit{Proceedings of the Winter
  565. Simulation Conference}, the author should keep in mind the key
  566. considerations outlined in this paper. Questions and suggestions for
  567. improvement of this document are welcome.
  568. \section*{ACKNOWLEDGMENTS}
  569. These guidelines are based on a similar document prepared by James O.\
  570. Henriksen, Stephen D.\ Roberts, and James R.\ Wilson for the {\em Proceedings
  571. of the 1986 Winter Simulation Conference}.
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  771. \section*{AUTHOR BIOGRAPHY}
  772. \noindent {\bf JAMES R. WILSON}
  773. is a professor in the Edward P. Fitts Department of Industrial and Systems
  774. Engineering at North Carolina State University. His current research
  775. interests are focused on probabilistic and statistical issues in the design
  776. and analysis of simulation experiments. He has held the following
  777. editorial positions: departmental editor of \textit{Management Science}
  778. (1988--1996); area editor of \textit{ACM Transactions on Modeling and
  779. Computer Simulation} (1997--2002); guest editor of a special issue of
  780. \textit{IIE Transactions} honoring Alan Pritsker (1999--2001); and
  781. Editor-in-Chief of \textit{ACM Transactions on Modeling and Computer
  782. Simulation} (2004--2010). He served The Institute of Management Sciences
  783. College on Simulation (now the INFORMS Simulation Society) as
  784. secretary-treasurer (1984--1986), vice president (1986--1988), and
  785. president (1988--1990). His activities in the Winter Simulation Conference
  786. (WSC) include service as proceedings editor
  787. (1986), associate program chair (1991), and program chair (1992). During
  788. the period 1997--2004, he was a member of the WSC Board of Directors
  789. corepresenting the INFORMS Simulation Society; and he served as secretary
  790. (2001), vice chair (2002), and chair (2003). During the period 2006--2009,
  791. he was a trustee of the WSC Foundation, serving as secretary (2006),
  792. vice-president (2007), and president (2008). He is a member of ACM, ASA,
  793. ASEE and SCS; and he is a fellow of IIE and INFORMS\@. His e-mail address
  794. is
  795. \href{mailto:jwilson@ncsu.edu}{jwilson@ncsu.edu}\textcolor{black}{,} and his web address is
  796. \href{http://www.ise.ncsu.edu/jwilson}{http://www.ise.ncsu.edu/jwilson}\textcolor{black}{.}
  797. \end{document}