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- %**************************************************************************
- %*
- %* Paper: ``INSTRUCTIONS FOR AUTHORS OF LATEX DOCUMENTS''
- %*
- %* Publication: 2018 Winter Simulation Conference Author Kit
- %*
- %* Filename: writgd18.tex
- %*
- %* Date: January 25, 2018 Time: 9:45 PM
- %* BASE of current version: Feb 01, 2010 (primary WSC'10 LaTeX file)
- %*
- %* Word Processing System: TeXnicCenter and MiKTeX
- %*
- %*
- %* All files need the following
- \input{wsc18style.tex} % download from author kit. Style files for wsc formatting. Don't remove this line - required for generating the final paper!
- \documentclass{wscpaperproc}
- \usepackage{latexsym}
- %\usepackage{caption}
- \usepackage{graphicx}
- \usepackage{mathptmx}
- %
- %****************************************************************************
- % AUTHOR: You may want to use some of these packages. (Optional)
- \usepackage{amsmath}
- \usepackage{amsfonts}
- \usepackage{amssymb}
- \usepackage{amsbsy}
- \usepackage{amsthm}
- %****************************************************************************
- %
- %****************************************************************************
- % AUTHOR: If you do not wish to use hyperlinks, then just comment
- % out the hyperref usepackage commands below.
- %% This version of the command is used if you use pdflatex. In this case you
- %% cannot use ps or eps files for graphics, but pdf, jpeg, png etc are fine.
- \usepackage[pdftex,colorlinks=true,urlcolor=blue,citecolor=black,anchorcolor=black,linkcolor=black]{hyperref}
- %% The next versions of the hyperref command are used if you adopt the
- %% outdated latex-dvips-ps2pdf route in generating your pdf file. In
- %% this case you can use ps or eps files for graphics, but not pdf, jpeg, png etc.
- %% However, the final pdf file should embed all fonts required which means that you have to use file
- %% formats which can embed fonts. Please note that the final PDF file will not be generated on your computer!
- %% If you are using WinEdt or PCTeX, then use the following. If you are using
- %% Y&Y TeX then replace "dvips" with "dvipsone"
- %%\usepackage[dvips,colorlinks=true,urlcolor=blue,citecolor=black,%
- %% anchorcolor=black,linkcolor=black]{hyperref}
- %****************************************************************************
-
- %
- %****************************************************************************
- %*
- %* AUTHOR: YOUR CALL! Document-specific macros can come here.
- %*
- %****************************************************************************
- %****************************************************************************
- %*
- %* Miscellaneous new command definitions I sometimes like to use...
- %
- \newcommand{\emdash}{\text{---}}
- \newcommand{\ben}{\begin{enumerate}
- \setlength{\parskip}{\smallskipamount}
- \setlength{\parsep}{\smallskipamount}
- \setlength{\itemsep}{\smallskipamount}
- }
- \newcommand{\een}{\end{enumerate}}
- %\newcommand{\sect}[1]{\section*{{\large\bf#1}}} % Better ver. of \section*{}
- %\renewcommand{\arraystretch}{1.5}
- \newcommand{\comment}[1]{}
- \newcount\hour \newcount\minutes \hour=\time \divide\hour by 60
- \minutes=\hour \multiply\minutes by -60 \advance\minutes by \time
- \def\Hour{\number\hour}
- \def\Minutes{\ifnum\minutes<10 0\fi\number\minutes}
- \def\HourMinutes{\Hour:\Minutes}
- %*
- %* End of miscellaneous new command definitions
- %*
- %*****************************************************************************
- % If you use theoremes
- \newtheoremstyle{wsc}% hnamei
- {3pt}% hSpace abovei
- {3pt}% hSpace belowi
- {}% hBody fonti
- {}% hIndent amounti1
- {\bf}% hTheorem head fontbf
- {}% hPunctuation after theorem headi
- {.5em}% hSpace after theorem headi2
- {}% hTheorem head spec (can be left empty, meaning `normal')i
- \theoremstyle{wsc}
- \newtheorem{theorem}{Theorem}
- \renewcommand{\thetheorem}{ \arabic{theorem}}
- \newtheorem{corollary}[theorem]{Corollary}
- \renewcommand{\thecorollary}{\arabic{corollary}}
- \newtheorem{definition}{Definition}
- \renewcommand{\thedefinition}{\arabic{definition}}
- %#########################################################
- %*
- %* The Document.
- %*
- \begin{document}
- %***************************************************************************
- % AUTHOR: AUTHOR NAMES GO HERE
- % FORMAT AUTHORS NAMES Like: Author1, Author2 and Author3 (last names)
- %
- % You need to change the author listing below!
- % Please list ALL authors using last name only, separate by a comma except
- % for the last author, separate with "and"
- %
- \WSCpagesetup{Wilson}
- % AUTHOR: Enter the title, all letters in upper case
- \title{GUIDELINES ON WRITING A GOOD PAPER FOR THE \\
- \textbf{\textit{PROCEEDINGS OF THE WINTER SIMULATION CONFERENCE}}}
- % AUTHOR: Enter the authors of the article, see end of the example document for further examples
- \author{James R. Wilson \\ [12pt]
- North Carolina State University \\
- Edward P. Fitts Department of Industrial and Systems Engineering \\
- Raleigh, NC 27695-7906, USA \\
- % Multiple authors are entered as follows.
- % You may also need to adjust the titlevbox size in the preamble - search for titlevboxsize
- }
- \maketitle
- % \input{wscpage2.tex}
- \section*{ABSTRACT}
- As an aid to authors who seek to improve the clarity and readability of
- their papers in the \textit{Proceedings of the Winter Simulation
- Conference}, this paper summarizes some useful guidelines on technical
- writing, including current references on each topic that is discussed.
- \section{OUTLINE OF KEY CONSIDERATIONS}
- \label{sec:intro}
- Writing a clear, readable exposition of complex technical work is at least
- as difficult as doing the work in the first place. Given below is an
- outline of key considerations to bear in mind during all stages of writing
- a paper that will be reviewed for possible presentation at the Winter
- Simulation Conference (WSC) as well as publication in the {\em Proceedings
- of the Winter Simulation Conference}. For questions about these
- guidelines, please send e-mail to
- \href{mailto:jwilson@ncsu.edu}{jwilson@ncsu.edu} or contact the proceedings
- editors.
- %\parindent=0em
- \ben %I
- \item[I.] Organizing the paper (what to do before beginning to write)
- \ben %A
- \item[A.] Analyze the situation---that is, the problem, the solution,
- and the target audience.
- \ben %1
- \item[1.] Formulate the objectives of the paper.
- \item[2.] Specify the scope of the paper's coverage of the subject and the
- results to be discussed. Orient the paper toward the theme of your session
- as indicated either by the title of your session or by the instructions of
- your session chair. Also take into account the general focus of the track
- containing your paper, which could be tutorials, case studies, vendors,
- methodologies, domain-specific applications, or general applications.
- \item[3.] Identify the target audience and determine the background knowledge
- that you can assume for this particular group of people. Introductory
- tutorials are generally attended by newcomers who are interested in the
- basics of simulation. Advanced tutorials are designed to provide more
- experienced professionals with a thorough discussion of special topics of
- much current interest; and some special-focus sessions in this track are
- designed to provide experts with an overview of recent fundamental advances
- in simulation theory. Methodology sessions are attended by professionals
- who have at least an undergraduate-level background in computer simulation
- techniques. In the case studies and applications tracks, session attendees
- are generally familiar with the area covered by their session. Vendor
- sessions may contain both new and experienced users of the relevant
- software products.
- \newpage
- \item[4.]
- Formulate the most logical sequence for presenting the information
- specified in item 2 to the readers identified in item 3. For a discussion
- of effective aids in organizing your paper (specifically, brainstorming,
- clustering, issue trees, and outlining), see chapter 3 of
- Matthews and Matthews (2014). In structuring your presentation, keep the
- following points in mind.
- %\newpage
- %\topmargin=-30.52pt
- %\setlength{\topmargin}{-30.52pt}
- \ben %a
- \item[a.]
- Introductory and advanced tutorials should have an educational perspective.
- Within the advanced tutorials track, special-focus sessions should synthesize
- the latest research results in a unified treatment of a given topic.
- \item[b.]
- Methodology contributions should provide state-of-the-art information on
- proven techniques for designing, building, and analyzing simulation models.
- \item[c.]
- Application papers should relate directly to the practice of simulation, and
- they should emphasize lessons of transferable value.
- \een %a
- \een %1
- \item[B.]
- Make outlines to organize your thoughts and then to plan both the
- written and oral presentations of your work. For excellent discussions of
- the construction and use of various types of outlines, see the following:
- chapter 1 of Menzel, Jones, and Boyd (1961); the sections titled ``Develop
- an issue tree to assess presentation balance'' and ``Outline to develop the
- paper's framework'' in chapter 3 of Matthews and Matthews (2014); and
- chapter 3 of Pearsall and Cook (2010).
- \ben %1
- \item[1.] The introductory paragraph(s)
- \ben %a
- \item[a.] State the precise subject of the paper immediately.
- \item[b.] State the problem to be solved.
- \item[c.] Summarize briefly the main results and conclusions.
- \item[d.] Tell the reader how the paper is organized.
- \een %a
- \item[2.] The main body of the paper
- \ben %a
- \item[a.] Include enough detail in the main body of the paper so that the
- reader can understand what you did and how you did it; however, you should
- avoid lengthy discussions of technical details that are not of general
- interest to your audience.
- \item[b.] Include a brief section covering notation, background information,
- and key assumptions if it is awkward to incorporate these items into the
- introductory paragraph(s).
- \item[c.] Include sections on theoretical and experimental methods as
- required. For an application paper, you should discuss the development of
- the simulation model---including input data acquisition as well as design,
- verification, validation, and actual use of the final simulation model.
- For a methodological or theoretical paper that requires substantial
- mathematical development, see Halmos (1970), Higham (1998), pages 1--8 of
- Knuth, Larrabee, and Roberts (1989), Krantz (1997, 2001), or Swanson
- (1999). For standard mathematical notation used in engineering and the
- sciences, see \textit{ISO 80000-2: Quantities and Units---Part 2:
- Mathematical Signs and Symbols to Be Used in the Natural Sciences and
- Technology} (ISO 2009) and Scheinerman (2011).
- \item[d.] Plan the results section to achieve the most effective mix
- of text, figures, and tables in the presentation of the findings. The
- definitive reference on the design of tables and figures is Tufte (2001).
- \een %a
- \item[3.] The concluding paragraph(s)
- \ben %a
- \item[a.]
- Explain how the theoretical and experimental results relate to the original
- problem. State why these results are important.
- \item[b.]
- Summarize any unresolved issues that should be the subject of future work.
- \item[c.]
- State the final conclusions explicitly in plain language.
- \een %a
- \een %1
- \een %A
- %\newpage
- \item[II.] Writing the paper
- \ben %A
- \item[A.]
- Prepare an abstract that is concise, complete in itself, and
- intelligible to a general reader in the field of simulation. The
- abstract may not exceed 150 words, and it should not contain any
- references or mathematical symbols.
- \ben %1
- \item[1.] Summarize the objectives of the paper.
- \item[2.] Summarize the results and conclusions.
- \item[3.] State the basic principles underlying any new theoretical or
- experimental methods that are developed in the paper.
- \item[4.]
- For complete instructions on the preparation of scientific abstracts, see
- {\it Guidelines for Abstracts\/} (NISO 2010), pages 91--93 of Carter
- (1987), page 5 of the {\it AIP Style Manual\/} (AIP 1990), or chapter 9 of
- Gastel and Day (2016).
- \een %1
- \item[B.] Write the rest of the paper as though you were talking to a group of
- interested colleagues about your work.
- \ben %1
- \item[1.]
- Strive for accuracy and clarity above all else.
- \item[2.]
- In writing the introduction, you should remember the following maxim:
- \begin{quote}
- The opening paragraph should be your best paragraph, and its opening
- sentence should be your best sentence. (Knuth, Larrabee, and Roberts 1989,
- 5)
- \end{quote}
- You cannot achieve such an ambitious goal on the first try; instead as you
- add new sections to the paper, you should review and revise all sections
- written so far. For more on the spiral plan of writing, see pages 131--133
- of Halmos (1970).
- \ben
- \item[a.]
- Like the abstract, the introduction should be accessible to general
- readers in the field of simulation.
- \item[b.]
- For methodology papers and advanced tutorials,
- substantially more advanced background may be assumed in the sections
- following the introduction.
- \een
- \item[3.]
- In constructing each sentence, place old and new information in the
- respective positions where readers generally expect to find such
- information. For an excellent discussion of the principles of scientific
- writing based on reader expectations, see Gopen and Swan (1990) and
- Williams and Bizup (2014, 2017).
- \ben %1
- \item[a.] Place in the topic position (that is, at the beginning of the
- sentence) the old information linking backward to the previous discussion.
- \item[b.] Place in the stress position (that is, at the end of the sentence)
- the new information you want to emphasize.
- \item[c.] Place the subject of the sentence in the topic position, and follow
- the subject with the verb as soon as possible.
- \item[d.] Express the action of each sentence in its verb.
- \een %1
- \item[4.]
- Make the paragraph the unit of composition.
- \ben %a
- \item[a.] Begin each paragraph with a sentence that summarizes the topic to be
- discussed or with a sentence that helps the transition from the previous
- paragraph.
- \item[b.] Provide a context for the discussion before asking the reader to
- consider new information.
- \item[c.]
- Avoid paragraphs of extreme length---that is, one-sentence paragraphs and
- those exceeding 200 words.
- \item[d.] Place the important conclusions in the stress position at the end of
- the paragraph.
- \een %a
- \item[5.]
- Allocate space to a topic in proportion to its relative importance.
- \item[6.]
- For methodology papers, emphasize the concepts of general applicability
- that underlie the solution procedure rather than the technical details that
- are specific to the problem at hand. Supply only the technical details and
- data that are essential to the development.
- \item[7.]
- For application papers, emphasize the new insights into the problem
- that you gained from designing, building, and using the simulation model.
- \item[8.]
- Use standard technical terms correctly.
- \ben %a
- \item[a.]
- For standard usage of mathematical terms, see James and James (1992) and
- Borowski and Borwein (2002). For example, a nonsquare matrix cannot be
- called ``orthogonal'' even if any two distinct columns of that matrix are
- orthogonal vectors.
- \item[b.]
- For standard usage of statistical terms, see Dodge (2003), Porkess (2005),
- and Upton and Cook (2014). For example, the probability density function
- of a continuous random variable cannot be called a ``probability mass
- function.''
- \item[c.]
- For standard usage of computer terms, see \textit{The Free On-Line
- Dictionary of Computing} (Howe 1993) and \textit{Dictionary of Algorithms
- and Data Structures} (Black 1998).
- \item[d.]
- For standard usage of industrial engineering terms, see {\it Industrial
- Engineering Terminology\/} (IISE 2000). For example, the time that a workpiece
- spends in a manufacturing cell may be called ``cycle time'' or ``flow
- time'' but not ``throughput time.''
- \een %a
- \item[9.]
- Avoid illogical or potentially offensive sexist language.
- See Miller and Swift (2001) for a commonsense approach to this issue.
- \item[10.]
- Strictly avoid the following---
- \ben %a
- \item[a.]
- religious, ethnic, or political references;
- \item[b.]
- personal attacks;
- \item[c.]
- excessive claims about the value or general applicability of your work; and
- \item[d.]
- pointed criticism of the work of other people.
- \een %a
- Such language has no place in scientific discourse under any circumstances,
- and it will not be tolerated by the proceedings editors. With
- respect to vendor sessions, items c and d immediately above require authors
- to avoid invidious comparisons of their products with competing products.
- \item[11.]
- In writing the final section of the paper containing conclusions and
- recommendations for future work, you should keep in mind the following
- maxim:
- \begin{quote}
- The mark of a good summary is revelation: ``Remember this, reader? And
- that? Well, here's how they fit together.'' (van Leunen 1992, 116)
- \end{quote}
- \een %1
- \item[C.] For each table, compose a caption that briefly summarizes the
- content of the table. Comment explicitly in the text on the significance
- of the numbers in the table; do not force the reader to guess at your
- conclusions. See sections 3.46--3.85 of {\em The Chicago Manual of Style\/}
- (University of Chicago Press 2010) or chapter 16 of Gastel and Day (2016)
- for a comprehensive discussion of how to handle tables.
- \item[D.]For each figure, compose a caption (or legend) that explains every
- detail in the figure---every curve, point, and symbol. See the {\em AIP
- Style Manual\/} (AIP 1990) or chapters 17 and 18
- of Gastel and Day (2016) for excellent examples.
- \item[E.] Revise and rewrite until the truth and clarity of every sentence are
- unquestionable.
- \ben %1
- \item[1.]
- For questions about the rules of English grammar and usage, see Bernstein
- (1965), Butterfield (2015), Fowler and Aaron (2016), Garner (2016), Hale
- (2013), O'Conner (2009), Strunk and White (2000), the \textit{Oxford
- English Dictionary} (Simpson and Weiner 1989), and {\it Webster's Third New
- International Dictionary of the English Language, Un\-a\-bridged\/} (Gove 1993).
- \item[2.]
- For those who use English as a second language, particularly helpful
- references are Booth (1993), Fowler and Aaron (2016), Huckin and Olsen
- (1991), and Yang (1995).
- \item[3.]
- For guidelines on how to edit your own writing effectively, see Cook (1985).
- \item[4.]
- For a comprehensive discussion of all aspects of scientific writing, see
- Alley (1996) and Gastel and Day (2016).
- \een %1
- \item[F.]
- Prepare a complete and accurate set of references that gives adequate credit
- to the prior work upon which your paper is based.
- \ben %1
- \item[1.]
- The author-date system of documentation is required for all papers
- appearing in the {\it Proceedings of the Winter Simulation Conference}.
- Chapter 15 of {\it The Chicago Manual of Style\/} (University of Chicago Press 2010) provides
- comprehensive, up-to-date information on this citation system.
- \item[2.]
- In preparing your list of references, you should strive for completeness,
- accuracy, and consistency. Using the information provided in your list of
- references, the interested reader should be able to locate each source of
- information cited in your paper.
- \item[3.]
- For complete instructions on citing electronic sources, see sections
- 14.4--14.13 of \textit{The Chicago Manual of Style} (University of Chicago Press 2010). For example, sections 14.5 and 14.6 contain basic
- information on uniform resource locators (URLs) and Digital Object
- Identifiers (DOIs), respectively; and section 14.12 provides useful rules
- for breaking a URL or a DOI across two or more lines either in the text or
- in the list of references. Many specific examples of citations for various
- types of electronic sources can be found throughout chapters 14 and 15 of
- \textit{The Chicago Manual of Style} (University of Chicago Press 2010).
- \item[4.] The final electronic version of your paper---that is, the portable
- document format (PDF) file ultimately produced from the Word or \LaTeX\
- source file of your paper---may include external hyperlinks referring to
- some of the electronic sources cited in the paper that are accessible
- online.
- \ben
- \item[a.]
- If an external hyperlink is live, then it is colored blue; and when viewing
- the PDF file of your paper on a computer, the reader may select (click)
- that hyperlink for immediate online access to the cited material. More
- specifically, selecting (clicking) a live external hyperlink will activate
- the reader's web browser so that, if all goes well, the cited source of
- information will be displayed in the web browser. A live external hyperlink
- may also be used to activate the reader's e-mail software for sending a
- message to a specific e-mail address; for example, see the hyperlink given
- in the first paragraph of this document.
- \item[b.]
- If an external hyperlink is not live, then it is colored black; and such a
- hyperlink merely displays the URL or DOI of the cited material without
- providing a mechanism for immediate online access to that material.
- \item[c.]
- If you use external hyperlinks in your paper, then you must ensure that the
- text displayed for each external hyperlink is correct and complete so that
- a reader who has only a hard copy of the paper can still access the cited
- material by (carefully) typing the relevant displayed text of the hyperlink
- into the address bar of a web browser or e-mail program. Remember that
- your responsibility for the accuracy and completeness of each hyperlink in
- your paper parallels your responsibility for the accuracy and completeness
- of each conventional citation of a nonelectronic source---neither the
- editors nor the publisher of the proceedings can verify any of this
- information for you.
- \een
- \een%1
- \item[G.]
- See Wilson (2002) for a discussion of the following ethical and
- ``strategic'' considerations in writing a scientific paper that will be
- considered for publication in a peer-reviewed journal or conference
- proceedings such as the \textit{Proceedings of the Winter Simulation
- Conference}:
- \ben%1
- \item[1.]
- achieving a consensus among collaborators on who should be a coauthor of
- the paper;
- \item[2.]
- achieving a consensus among coauthors on the order of authorship in the paper's
- byline; and
- \item[3.]
- writing the paper so as to anticipate and answer key questions that will
- be asked by the paper's referees and readers.
- \een%1
- \een %A
- \item[III.] Achieving a natural and effective style
- \ben %A
- \item[A.] Alfred North Whitehead memorably expressed the gist of
- the matter of writing style:
- \begin{quote}
- Finally, there should grow the most austere of all mental qualities; I
- mean the sense for style. It is an aesthetic sense, based on admiration
- for the direct attainment of a foreseen end, simply and without waste.
- Style in art, style in literature, style in science, style in logic,
- style in practical execution have fundamentally the same aesthetic
- qualities, namely attainment and restraint. The love of a subject in
- itself and for itself, where it is not the sleepy pleasure of pacing a
- mental quarter-deck, is the love of style as manifested in that study.
- \smallskip\parindent=1.2em
- Here we are brought back to the position from which we started, the
- utility of education. Style, in its finest sense, is the last acquirement
- of the educated mind; it is also the most useful. It pervades the whole
- being. The administrator with a sense for style hates waste; the engineer
- with a sense for style economises his material; the artisan with a sense
- for style prefers good work. Style is the ultimate morality of mind.
- (Whitehead 1929, 12)
- \end{quote}
- Kurt Vonnegut made the following equally trenchant observation on
- writing style.
- \begin{quote}
- Find a subject you care about and which you in your heart feel others
- should care about. It is this genuine caring, and not your games with
- language, which will be the most compelling and seductive element in your
- style. (Vonnegut 1985, 34)
- \end{quote}
- Strunk and White (2000), Williams and Bizup (2014, 2017), and Zinsser
- (2006) are excellent references on achieving a natural and effective
- writing style.
- \item[B.] Contrast the following descriptions of an experiment in optics:
- \ben %1
- \item[1.] I procured a triangular glass prism, to try therewith the celebrated
- phenomena of colors. And for that purpose, having darkened my laboratory, and
- made a small hole in my window shade, to let in a convenient quantity of the
- sun's light, I placed my prism at the entrance, that the light might be
- thereby refracted to the opposite wall. It was at first a very pleasing
- diversion to view the vivid and intense colors produced thereby.
- \item[2.]
- For the purpose of investigating the celebrated phenomena of
- chromatic refrangibility, a triangular glass prism was procured.
- After darkening the laboratory and making a small aperture in an
- otherwise opaque window covering in order to ensure that the optimum
- quantity of visible electromagnetic radiation (VER) would be admitted
- from solar sources, the prism was placed in front of the aperture for
- the purpose of reflecting the VER to the wall on the opposite side of
- the room. It was found initially that due to the vivid and intense
- colors which were produced by this experimental apparatus, the overall
- effect was aesthetically satisfactory when viewed by the eye.
- \een %1
- The most striking difference between these two accounts of the experiment
- is the impersonal tone of the second version. According to version 2,
- literally nobody performed the experiment. Attempting to avoid the first
- person, the author of version 2 adopted the third person; this in turn
- forced the author to use passive verbs. As Menzel, Jones, and Boyd (1961,
- 79) point out, ``Passive verbs increase the probability of mistakes in
- grammar; they start long trains of prepositional phrases; they foster
- circumlocution; and they encourage vagueness.'' Notice the dangling
- constructions in the second sentence of version 2. Version 1 was written
- by Isaac Newton (1672, 3076). Even though it was written over 340 years
- ago, Newton's prose is remarkable for its clarity and readability.
- \item[C.] To achieve a natural and effective writing style, you should adhere
- to the following principles that are elaborated in chapter 5 of Menzel, Jones,
- and Boyd (1961):
- \ben %1
- \item[1.] Write simply.
- \item[2.] Use the active voice.
- \item[3.]
- Use plain English words rather than nonstandard technical jargon or foreign
- phrases.
- \item[4.]
- Use standard technical terms correctly.
- \item[5.]
- Avoid long sentences and extremely long (or short) paragraphs.
- \item[6.]
- Avoid slavish adherence to any set of rules for technical writing, including
- the rules enumerated here.
- \item[7.]
- Remember that the main objective is to communicate your ideas clearly to your
- audience.
- \een %1
- \een %A
- \een %I
- \section{SUMMARY}
- In writing a paper for publication in the \textit{Proceedings of the Winter
- Simulation Conference}, the author should keep in mind the key
- considerations outlined in this paper. Questions and suggestions for
- improvement of this document are welcome.
- \section*{ACKNOWLEDGMENTS}
- These guidelines are based on a similar document prepared by James O.\
- Henriksen, Stephen D.\ Roberts, and James R.\ Wilson for the {\em Proceedings
- of the 1986 Winter Simulation Conference}.
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- \section*{AUTHOR BIOGRAPHY}
-
- \noindent {\bf JAMES R. WILSON}
- is a professor in the Edward P. Fitts Department of Industrial and Systems
- Engineering at North Carolina State University. His current research
- interests are focused on probabilistic and statistical issues in the design
- and analysis of simulation experiments. He has held the following
- editorial positions: departmental editor of \textit{Management Science}
- (1988--1996); area editor of \textit{ACM Transactions on Modeling and
- Computer Simulation} (1997--2002); guest editor of a special issue of
- \textit{IIE Transactions} honoring Alan Pritsker (1999--2001); and
- Editor-in-Chief of \textit{ACM Transactions on Modeling and Computer
- Simulation} (2004--2010). He served The Institute of Management Sciences
- College on Simulation (now the INFORMS Simulation Society) as
- secretary-treasurer (1984--1986), vice president (1986--1988), and
- president (1988--1990). His activities in the Winter Simulation Conference
- (WSC) include service as proceedings editor
- (1986), associate program chair (1991), and program chair (1992). During
- the period 1997--2004, he was a member of the WSC Board of Directors
- corepresenting the INFORMS Simulation Society; and he served as secretary
- (2001), vice chair (2002), and chair (2003). During the period 2006--2009,
- he was a trustee of the WSC Foundation, serving as secretary (2006),
- vice-president (2007), and president (2008). He is a member of ACM, ASA,
- ASEE and SCS; and he is a fellow of IIE and INFORMS\@. His e-mail address
- is
- \href{mailto:jwilson@ncsu.edu}{jwilson@ncsu.edu}\textcolor{black}{,} and his web address is
- \href{http://www.ise.ncsu.edu/jwilson}{http://www.ise.ncsu.edu/jwilson}\textcolor{black}{.}
- \end{document}
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